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8 beautiful years

             I see him in the crowded halls . I go up to him and I told him I like you but let's just start from the beginning. Hello it's me Vanessa this is story about someone who is very special to me. I first met this person in the third grade I was the new kid and immediately I wanted to become friends with him. I never really liked him I was little I never thought of that but I guess as I got older times changed. We grew up together we did everything together and like every basic love story I fell in love with him. We were best friends and always talk to each other about a problems. But today was different today he didn't have that smile that can make everybody smile. Today he didn't talk to no one which is weird because he has millions of friends. Everytime I try to talk to him text him I got no response. Like if he didn't exist. Something was going on and I was eager to find out.               Then I found ou...

Episode 2: What's on my Mind

Hello its me i am back today i don't feel proud of myself. Sadly i have failed on turning in work and this is the first time in a class where when i don't turn in something i feel bad. Which is because i respect my teacher so much that i feel ashamed that i failed him. But i have to move on and be better so my teacher DR.Preston can see that i actually want to take this seriously. I also do this thing which i hate myself for doing this but i tend to d so many things because i guess my dumb head thinks i can do it and then everything fails all together. so yeah well that's whats on my mind good bye see u next Friday :)

Episode 1: What's on my Mind

Hello its Denisse and here is where I will tell u what is on my mind i am thinking each week am going to do this. Hope u like it. so first thing is why don't we just do everything on the tablets i know what people are thinking. Then what we happen to the library we let me tell u. There are computers there so BAMM and we still need to check out books. so the library will not go out of business but i jut hate text books. I think they are boring. Also come on think about it. If the school really knew what they were doing then they would know teen  love there technology. so why not made them do homework on the thing they love the most. Plus they can't say i lost it because there always have there phone in there hands. That's all for today see you next week goodbye :) 

The Plot Thickens

Do you like action? Then you'll love stories that are driven by plot. Here are the key ingredients to a good plot. I feel like the good ingredients to a plot is when you get expecting expected where the tables turn and you are shot. When even though you try to connect everything together somehow it doesn't go good it doesn't go well. I love expect the unexpected most of my good movies that I recommend to people are those kind of movies. I love when the good guy turns out to be the bad guy. I hate those movies work that's a good guy save the day in the bad guy goes to jail I don't like those. Cuz I know it's going to happen which means I just watched the movie already. The movies I make me think harder than I have to. The movies that I don't know who is the bad guy. Those are the movies that makes the plot amazingly good. I feel like when the plot thickens is that when you feel like you're in the movie. And if you were there who would you choose that was...

The Making of the Essay

The night were long but i stayed there working trying to get in right. I am not gonna lie i wrote three essay until i finally thought the last one was the best. At first i wrote idea and then on another piece of  paper i wrote the answer to the question we had to answer in the essay. Then i did a rought draft on paper i did like it look like words all cramped together that made no sense. then i did another was better but i didn't like it. Then for the last one i was really putting as much effort as i could. I was putting my opinion and the quotes from the story. I read it again love it i could understand it. Last i publish it and there that was the making of my essay.

I AM GSD

As an independent learner I feel like I learned more about myself and I get to go on my own pace. I like it better because the teacher gets to focus on you instead of the whole class. I like that we get to use it tablet and we get to do our own things that are useful for our Landing not for other kids. I feel this will help me my college because it makes me more competitive. And I feel smarter an intelligent human being that knows about what we're talking about. I feel like independently is the best way to go so you can learn more about yourself about school and about others. I am Denisse Rivera and I am proud Independent learner.

Essay on: Katha Upanishasd

             In this story called Katha Upanishasd we see how the story can be an a allegory. And how much Nachiketa symbolizes what's best about being a teenager. And how death appears as a character in the story as a human a person and not an idea. Allegory is a story poem or picture that can be interpreted to reveal a hidden meaning typically immoral or a political one.           First what makes it classified as a allegory is how death appears as a character in the story Death actually appears as a person / thing not as an idea. In the story he can grant wishes and he has a place where you can find them like human. Very different from what I know. Supposedly that is he's kind of like the devil but not really because in the story they call him death. In the story Death tells Nachiketa that he can have three boons which are wishes and out of all those wishes he one of them is that he wants to know what happens after death....